treatment again

we relised our previous treatment was following the conventions of different genres of films so we are doing an new treatment

the set

 The Set

we decided to use an messy bedroom for the character for Dave whereas it is being tidyer for Tarquin

inthese pictures we used beer cans to be portraying an untidy messy life

in the bathroom this is where we are going to be shooting Tarquins scene it is blue reflecting calmness it is also tidy

this is where we are going to be filming the fidge scene also the milk scene we are going to put our hd camera in the fridge/ cupboard to look as though we are in the fridge. to put the veiwer in the action

this is the messy sink we are using for Daves house as there is beer bottles in the sink

our inspriation

our inspriration the simpsons

Our inspiration for our film opening is from The Simpsons, it's when Homer gets a job as an ice cream man he begins getting dressed lighting fast with the clothing jmping on him .

some other inspriations are bridget jones diary in the opening she is commenting over the  visual action which is inkeeping with our comerdy genre .

treatment

Treatment Altered

Logline

Altered is an character driven comedy about two very different men leading extremely different lifestyles when they meet each other they have no idea how much their lives are going to be changed

Main characters

·         Tarquin is our sophisticated eloquent character well spoken schoolboy who thinks naively he has everything in control

·         Dave is our snobby untidy scruff going nowhere fast

Scene one                                            

                       Our storyline begins when both men are getting up for an early start to work Tarquin has everything in control his tie practically jumping on to him in  contrast Dave  down the road can never organise himself enough his untidy disorganised things scattered anywhere

They go to work in the most boring office in the world where  cringy chat-up lines things going wrong mix ups break ups in an office-job but the real problems begin when our main characters are sent on an office assignment to Venice Tarquin is very willing until realising dave is coming too when they arrive tarquin just wants to drink in all the fancyest reatauants dine with all the italien stars in contrast dave wants to pick up girls as much attention as possible as an compromise they decide to live each others lives . this is when their social lives are changed or altered forever
it finishes now with the two men better becasue of it tarquin is not so snobby but Dave more elquant cleaner smoother with women  altered forever 
thank you for reading our comedy treatment  

this is our first Draft