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Altered is an character driven comedy about two very different men leading extremely different lifestyles when they meet each other they have no idea how much their lives are going to be changed

Main characters

·         Tarquin is our sophisticated eloquent character well spoken schoolboy who thinks naively he has everything in control

·         Dave is our snobby untidy scruff going nowhere fast

Scene one                                            

                       Our storyline begins when both men are getting up for an early start to work Tarquin has everything in control his tie practically jumping on to him in  contrast Dave  down the road can never organise himself enough his untidy disorganised things scattered anywhere

They go to work in the most boring office in the world where  cringy chat-up lines things going wrong mix ups break ups in an office-job but the real problems begin when our main characters are sent on an office assignment to Venice Tarquin is very willing until realising dave is coming too when they arrive tarquin just wants to drink in all the fancyest reatauants dine with all the italien stars in contrast dave wants to pick up girls as much attention as possible as an compromise they decide to live each others lives . this is when their social lives are changed or altered forever
it finishes now with the two men better becasue of it tarquin is not so snobby but Dave more elquant cleaner smoother with women  altered forever 
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