Media film draft

This is our media film draft altered without our ident or credits yet

• In this final draft we are very pleased with the outcome . things we are parclicularly pleased with are
• the opening shot of Dave in bed it is really setting the scene also Dave is in an sleeping bag wihich is connotating povity, he is also sleeping in his clothing. showing Dave is messy
• we also partically liked the music that we put with it. it is quite jolly but also connotates comedy.
• the shot of the fridge with the milk in the fridge we shot putting the camera in the fridge this we think was quite innitave
• the corflakes scene was shot using the hd camera then edited using sony vegus to make it in slow motion
• we are using high shots to give an feeling of power over Dave
• in Tarquins shots he is using low shots giving him power over us
• the music is sexy reflecting his personality
• in the clothing scene we were filming it backwards then in editing reversed all the shots making it seam effortless
• in the bathrom scene we also are using slow motion so it is fitting with Tarquins sexy personality
• his clothing is much more professional reflecting that he is the boss
• when Tarquin is saying about how spreading his attention is difficult he is spreading the butter
• the plate butter knife is all organised reflecting his personality
• when he is going to workTarquin is playing to the camera like we are the women he is adressing

choosing audio

We are choosing the audio to fit in with the film.The audio changes becasue we wanted the music to be playing as our main personalitys are talking about themselves this creates the mood. Tarquin is getting something slow more jazzy becasue he is our  flirty boss  whereas dave is getting something more slow relaxing . Music really affects the film.

We added the audio to the film the talking part of it  we were trying to equil with the music so it didnt over power the speaking too much the dyagaic noises like the alarm clock we made louder.The music in the film the simpsons they use funny music to fit in with their film

        


  

tarquins script

Tarquins script

Hellooo, ladies, oh, and gentlemen, my name is Tarquin, I'm 24 and, I'm the boss, by day I work at The Cool & Sexy Company and all I do is make sure people are doing what they should do, and most of the time they do, so I just sit there chilling and making all the money, I used to attend the Posh & Expensive School of money and power, I was top of the class and I didn't even try, I guess god just gave me of power of awesomness, oh, and If you're wondering why my clothes fly onto my sexy body, I don't know to be honest, I'm just that cool.  By night I party hard raving with my homies, I get all the ladies lusting over me, sometimes it does get difficult spreading my attention equally between all the thousands of beautiful women though, but I guess it's just something I'm gunna have to get used to, I've been cursed with good looks.
Anyway back to the subject of work, i've been thinking. There is one man that i really need to fire, the cleaner ... I think his name is, David or something? How dare he come to work in the same filthy clothes for a week. It's disgusting! TRAMP! Maybe I'll fire him today, yehhhh, annyway, got to go now, goodbye ladiesss!

i love how we all put something in this script it really fits the charactrisation that we were looking to express  it will impove it when we put the talking with the songs. this script is showing that Tarquin is upper class or thinks he is. we really are trying to get the charactisation of the characters in the first opening to the film because our inspriations are taken from Bridget Jones film by working title .comedy films often have the main character talking over the opening scene as this is sean in Bridget Jones this demonstrates. we really love how the script is showing that Tarquin is an arrogant , mean , powerfull , we all were helping think of how we could write the script so we all brought our own thoughts of this person.

daves script

Script for Dave

Erm... I'm Dave, a 34 year old office cleaner man from Kent, I earn my living by cleaning officees, I hate my job, nobody likes me any everyone ignores me, I don't even earn enough to live, I'm still on benefits... My old job was much better, I was a bin man until I got fired! But I was the best, damn, binman in the world, empting bins like a BOSS.. but them I went to work one day, a liiiittle drunk... annnnnnnd, kinda fell asleep driving. Oh, and I ran over a dog. But it's okay, well, the dogs not okay the dogs dead... but I'm okay, my job will do. The only reason I'm still at my job is my boss, his name is Tarquin he's pretty cool, always saying hello and giving me the respect I deserve which none of the other workers give me, ahh well, off to work now, see ya.

in this script we all were trying to express the slobbyness of Dave. we wrote these scripts as the group this was benifishal to us becasue we kept passing the laptop writing new plans for it this really was fun as we coulld use slang to make it as lazy as possible.

re filming

when we began watching back our film we realised that there were  continuity errors we wanted to re film the opening . inthis new film we put in more camera shots , more to kyles part , more bathroom shown more smoother editing. we reduced darryls to one minute becasue previouly it was longer than kyles so they didnt equal.

treatment again

Treatment Altered

Logline

Altered is an character driven comedy about two very different men leading extremely different lifestyles as when these unusual men finally get thrown together as neither expect their lives to be so amazingly altered

·         Tarquin is our sophisticated eloquent character well spoken schoolboy who thinks naively he has everything in control nearly company boss  feeling everything is going well

·         Dave is our  untidy cleaner who has tarquin has to clean tarquins office  nobody notices him he just longs for attention

They are anything but pals but when tarquin gets stuck in the lift with dave their lives swap quite literally.